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Witness Protection - Work in Progress
Joni clasped the steering wheel,
craning her neck to read the sign in the pale light of the street lamp. Dunlap
Street. Where in the heck is Dunlap Street? She
cursed her friend for giving her such poor directions. She pulled through the
intersection, avoiding the broken glass. That’s all she needed, a flat tire in
this neighborhood.
After a few more blocks, the
residential street turned into a rundown industrial belt. Graffiti marred the
cement buildings, and Joni got the feeling that she should never have left her
apartment. She didn’t need any Tupperware. What the heck was she thinking?
Finally pulling over with a sigh of
defeat, Joni reached for her glove compartment. The map should be in there
somewhere. She riffled through the papers, longing for the day when she had
enough money to get a GPS system. Or a cell
phone. A phone would be nice right now.
Shouting carried from up the
street, distracting her.
“I swear to you, man. I didn’t. Put
that thing away.”
“You mess with my girl, and think you
can walk away from it?”
Scanning the darkness, she tried to
see where the voices were coming from. The pale light from a street lamp shone
on two men circling each other, one with his arms in the air. When the other
turned she saw the gun. Her breath caught and she instinctively crouched lower
in her seat.
“You’re over-reacting,” the man
with his arms in the air said.
A woman got out of a dark green van.
She wore a mini skirt so short Joni wondered where the rest of it went. “Anthony,
calm down. We didn’t do nothin’.”
“Stay out of this, Theresa.” He
waved her away.
“I ain’t gonna let you plug Nick.” Theresa
grabbed his arm, struggling with the gun. Anthony jerked his arm away, and then
pointed the gun at her. A noise like a firecracker sounded. She doubled over,
slumped to her knees, and then crumbled to the pavement. Nick took off in the
other direction. Anthony fired again, and Nick fell face first onto the street.
Two other men got out of the van.
“Put them in the back.”
Joni’s throat tightened. She did
not just see that. The men lifted Theresa by the arms and legs, her head
bobbing lifelessly as they carried her. They threw her body into the back of
the van.
“Hey, are those headlights on? Is
someone in that car?” One of the men pointed in her direction.
Fear clenched her stomach, and she
fumbled to put the car into drive. Anthony turned, his gun pointed at her, a
hard stare on his face. She floored it, the car lurching forward. She jerked
the steering wheel, flipping the car around. Her back window shattered.
With no time to think, Joni slammed
on the accelerator, desperately trying to remember the way she had come. She
sped through the streets until she was deeply entrenched in the residential
housing. Constantly scanning the street behind her, she turned and twisted
through the area until she found a major arterial. Highway thirty. She knew
where she was. Relief hit her hard, but her heart didn’t slow down until she
pulled into the police station.
Have you found posting parts of a WIP generates any interest, fans or sales? One thing I have considered is to record an MP3 of each chapter of my first book. Then release a chapter a week. At 30 chapters it would take 3/5 of a year. That's a lot of potential PR.
ReplyDeleteYes, it does generate interest. And I did see some sales on The Overtaking when I posted a snip from the second book in the series. I know Nathan Lowell has gotten a lot of fans from his podcasts he does. I think he does one chapter at a time, but you could ask him. If you're going to record yourself reading, I think podcasting them is the best way to distribute. Good luck with it!
ReplyDeleteVicki,
ReplyDeleteYou are really onto a great story here! I mean, I need you to finish OT Book 2, but I really can't wait to read this new one. Very nice start! Are you excited?
Cidney
Thank you, Cidney! Yes, I'm very excited. I get all worked up when a work in progress starts taking off and the writing almost writes itself. :) And I won't forget about Danielle and Shayne! I promise to keep working on that too. :D
ReplyDeleteI like it! (Claps)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Artemis! You made my day. :D
ReplyDeleteVery nice.
ReplyDeleteI've been thinking of posting some of the chapters of my WIP on my blog to generate interest and gain fans for when I do publish.
One of my concerns has been if the grammar errors that slip through will turn readers off and make them decide to not buy when my book is finished. Or do you think people understand that it is not a finished product?
I would have it critiqued or edited first. You definitely don't want to post something with a lot of errors in it, that will turn people away.
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